[inspired by "Sinking," by Blood and Water and Job 19]
I was gulping blue-green water
When I should have been reaching up for air.
I was sinking faster than before
Doubting my choice to care.
I was at peace about the future
Unflustered by thoughts of drowning.
I was contented in my odd estate
Knowing the fruitlessness of frowning.
I should have listened when you told me:
Fish are harmless, swim away
But hurt feelings linger longer
Barnacles that come and stay.
I guess the sea had drenched my clothes
For I was down deeper every second.
I couldn’t imagine redeeming power,
Fearing myself and rather hesitant.
I was swallowing what brought me death
How I needed sure protection.
You gave me gills, you freed my fins
And I’m assured of your affection.
~
Somehow all that matters now is: You are holy.
For I know that my Redeemer lives,
and at the last he will stand upon the earth.
- Psalm 19:25
3 comments:
Well done... The last stanza, especially. Those rhymes are fresh.
Fish? I'm not sure what you meant here, but I suppose I can surmise?
I enjoyed the part about doubting your choice to care, it made sense to the way I experience life.
this is good, I like it.
This is beautiful. I can see the story of my own recent past in these verses...
and the awe of what He has done in your own. 'Can't wait to hear about it later! =D
Wow, skillfully written, Kristen! (Per usual!) Hm, and a familiar sentiment. God is just so good to us! <3
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